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The main adult Mya costume ^^ Based off of the design done by mah daddeh Matt Stewart, and tweaked by yours truely.

If you're going to KumoriCon, look for Kim...shes COSPLAYING THIS. X3 *squeal*

Exodus Faded Spirits (c) Ron Kieser

Note: This piece of art was done for the clothing design. Please critique, but critique on the design aspects rather than the artistic quality o_o

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:icongrandfunk:
That's some real nice colouring. I like how the pallette of colours work very well with each other.

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:iconjing-chan:
this outfit is just too awsome! :giggle:
:iconnoke89:
Great work,very nice!

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:iconregless:
Hmm, noy bad. The flames and designs are well the colors compliment each other nicely. The proportions are accurate as well for the most part but her are some suggestions for your next pic.

A: The elbow joint should be at the waist, not the beginning of the hip.
B:For a thing person of which your char bviousally is, the frarm muscle is too wide.
C: The left arm has an odd bend about it and the should come out far too much. For that pose most of the should should be hend the torso.
C:The neck is quite long, although this was harder to notice due to the shawl.
D: I would say the legs are quite long, but they due that in such animes as sailor moon. The kneecap however is definately longer than it should be.
E: This one is just a style thing, but I would make the tail longer. As a general rule for myself I try to make it as long as the leg or more.
F: The ears are also off. Given that they are cat ears though theres a number of ways to fix them. The most obvious to me is too just move the right one down a bit and the left one back.
G: While I do like the shading on the face, the rest of the pic seems, in a work, half assed. You do have a basic understand of how folds work, but in the pic it looks like you generalized the shading then went nuts with the smudge tool. I know because I've done this myself and it didn't look any better when I did it. Well, good luck in the future.

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:iconotakusan:
nicely done :)
what did you use to color this with?

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:iconsulhaut:
Despite what Regless has said, I think this is great!
He does raise some good points, but a few of them are opinion,
Keeping out of a flame war,
It is of my personal opinion that this is great!
Good job!
:brushteeth: My teeth are whitening looking at it
:iconronime:
that is PERFECT!!! You are an awesome designer XD I'm glad I hired you ^^

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:iconkawaiiyume:
awesome! i love the warm colors! ^^ i agree with most of what regless said, except for the tail thing, because people with tails (cat-people, nekos whatever) are fictional and the artist has the license to make those features however they like. i think it looks better at the length it is, as long as the legs would be too long IMO.

great work :heart:
:iconburkothebeerman:
Thanks for the critique ^^ Though, actually, I'd only drawn this picture for the clothing design o_o It wasn't meant to be a work of art. I'll make sure too mention that next time ^^;

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